McCarthy Discussion

Dave's experience is comparable to my own because I am also confused on how to write and the style of writing that I need to do. It is very different from high school, but it is not a complete inconvenience. I think this is so only because I don't have a lot of classes that have assigned many writing assignments. The only thing that puzzles me is that I don't understand exactly what I am doing wrong on my papers. I really think that I am doing good when I turn my papers in, but unfortunately I don't do as good as I thought I did.